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Merlini lühijutud [16.08.2012 - I love a demon]
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Merlini lühijutud [16.08.2012 - I love a demon]
by Merlin Kolm Aug 15, 2012 5:42 pm
Mõtlesin siis teha teema, kuhu ma postitan kõik oma lühijutud. Hetkel on mul inglise keele tuju, nii et need kaks tulevad selles keeles. Ootan kriitikat ja ka soove, mis teemal te sooviks 
16.08.2012 - I love a demon
15.08.2012. - Angel with a shotgun
15.08.2012 - Last smile
16.08.2012 - I love a demon
- Spoiler:
- Once there lived a demon. He didn`t love anyone or anything. Wait… no there was one girl in his life but she betrayed him. She said that the demon was too ugly for her and she ran to her angel. A guy who was perfect in all ways. After that, demons heart grew darker by every day. Soon he forgot everything about the world above him. A world where creatures died young betrayed each other and killed each other for fun.
Minutes grew into hours, hours into days, days into weeks, weeks into months, months into years, and years into centuries but he was still alone. All alone in the Hell. The demon knew that he would be alone. Forever. Until one day.
That girl had always thought that she would be alone. She wasn`t beautiful for humans, not enough smart or not enough cruel. She was something more than all others. She was a queen. Angel of love and peace. She was everything good.
One day, the girl was sent to Hell. She was the sacrifice for the demon. If the demon killed her, peace would come to her people. The girl did it because she was tired of hearing how she was weird.
When the girl walked up to the demon, she felt something. Something that she hadn`t felt for sixteen years. Her heart fell for the demon. The demon smile with a pain in his heart. How could he kill her? That was out of question.
“So you are the sacrifice?” the demon asked quietly.
“Yes. I`m all yours,” the girl answered and looked into the demons´ eyes.
The demon walked slowly to the girl and raised her chin to have a better look at her. Maybe his body was just getting old? No. He knew what he felt for her. It was something he never thought that he could feel again. Love.
“Are you going to kill me?” the girl asked with a smile.
The demon couldn`t answer. What should he had answered? That no, he loves her even though he didn`t know her name? That she was everything she had looked for? The demon was in more pain of that because he knew that if the girl doesn`t say that she loves him; he would have to kill her. But because he couldn`t kill her, he must give her to other demons. Who would do more things to her.
“Dear, demon. Before you start enjoying my blood I want to say something,” the girl said and took the monsters` hand and kissed it gently.
“I love you,” whispered the girl, her tear falling on the demons` hand.
“You can`t love me…” the demon whispered back, trying not to hug her and roar out of happiness.
“I don`t care if you`re a demon. I don`t care!”
“I`m ugly. I kill people to live. I have a twisted personality. You can`t love me,” the demon kept talking, taking steps back.
The girl looked in pain as the demon walked back but she kept walking towards him. She didn`t care about that. She loves him. More than herself. If she had to feel pain as Jesus had, she would. She would anything.
“I don`t care. I love you. You`re not ugly for me,” she said and touched the demons` face gently.
“For me you are the most beautiful thing ever. Your personality is the half I need to fill mine. Your kills will be forgiven for the lives I have saved. I love you.”
The demon looked at the girl and felt that he was crying. He hadn`t cried for twenty one centuries. He knew this meant it. He really loves her and she loved her back. The demon took the girls` face between his two big hands and looked into her eyes.
“I love you as well,” he whispered and kissed her.
Never think that you are the ugliest or the poorest. There are people who are worse than you. People who wish to be you and have what you have. If you have a person you love and who loves you back, then treasure her/ him. Believe in yourself - by Merlin
15.08.2012. - Angel with a shotgun
- Spoiler:
- Angel looked in front of her. War was everywhere. In front of her, behind, on her left hand, on her right hand… Everywhere. Why did humans start wars? Couldn`t they just live in peace? Why do they have to take each other’s land and people? Why do soldiers kill women and children?
The girl walked slowly, looking at the corpse lying around her. All of them were teenagers. The bomb had landed on a high school. They were probably learning something new but now? Now they were dead. They would never have a family, learn new things or meet new people. All of that was taken by one action.
Angel bowed to close one guys` eyes. Then she noticed it. The guy was clinging to a girl, who was under someone. Lass quickly pushed the corpse just to be shocked. The girl had the most beautiful eyes ever seen. Even for an angel.
Those eyes were gray but had something unique inside them. Silver color. Those eyes` were of an angel. She quickly got up and looked at the girl. Yes – she was an angel. Liza smiled sadly and closed her own kinds` eyes. If there something she could do, it was closing her eyes and hoping she was happy wherever she was.
As Liza closed the eyes, she noticed something else. The angel was holding something in her hand. She gently opened it and felt tears in her eyes. It was a shotgun. A gun that could destroy an angel. This unknown girl had done it. Was it because of this guy? Probably but Liza didn`t know for sure. Only she had known the reason. The angel with a shotgun.
15.08.2012 - Last smile
- Spoiler:
- She closes her eyes and thinks about her life. Why was she born in this world? Was it just to die? To just be abused as other children? To just be a toy of adults? She didn`t want it. Luna wanted something more. She wanted a life – full of happiness and laughter and friends. Could she get it? Of course no and now she has the opportunity to change it all.
Slowly, Luna opens the door to the roof. She feels wind playing with her short brown hair. Hair which used to be her treasure. Before… Before he came to her life. He ruined her! He might have thought that what he did was nothing. Of course it was nothing for him! He was a selfish adult. Just like all of them.
Lass took careful steps towards the edge of the roof. She was barefoot and she could feel the cold tiles scratching her. The pain was nothing. Compared to what she had to suffer, this was nothing.
Luna stopped at the edge and breathed everything in she could. This would be last time she saw the sun, the sky, the forest. This would be the last time she would know someone like he. Last time of everything. Luna stretched her hands out and felt them going numb from the wind.
“Luna!” someone cried out behind her.
The girl looked behind her and saw him. He had followed him. Why? Why did he make more pain to her? He had destroyed her yet somehow it wasn`t even his fault. It was hers – Luna’s fault. She had believed and trusted him. She had done everything wrong for herself yet right for him. She had fallen into his trap.
“Goodbye,” whispered Luna with a small smile.
Then she jumped. She watched the same things she had watched for so long already. Sixteen years. She knew she had lived too long. Her time had come yet Luna wasn`t scared. No. She was happy. She would be free forever. She managed to do one more thing before landing on the ground. She smiled. Her last smile.
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Re: Merlini lühijutud [16.08.2012 - I love a demon]
by tuuli Kolm Aug 15, 2012 9:30 pm
natukene kohmakas on, kuid isegi suhteliselt ok
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Re: Merlini lühijutud [16.08.2012 - I love a demon]
by Merlin Nelj Aug 16, 2012 6:49 am
Olgu ma püüan ennast parandada.
Ma pole tegelikult inglise keeles kirjutaja, rohkem nagu eesti keeles. Kuid kui su sõbrad oskavad ainult inglise keelt siis tuleb ka selles keeles osata kirjutada normaalselt.
Kuid tänan, et viitsisid ära lugeda
Ning uus on ka püsti - "I love a demon"
Ma pole tegelikult inglise keeles kirjutaja, rohkem nagu eesti keeles. Kuid kui su sõbrad oskavad ainult inglise keelt siis tuleb ka selles keeles osata kirjutada normaalselt.
Kuid tänan, et viitsisid ära lugeda
Ning uus on ka püsti - "I love a demon"
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Re: Merlini lühijutud [16.08.2012 - I love a demon]
by tuuli Nelj Aug 16, 2012 3:54 pm
su eesti keelsed jutud on paremad, inglise keeles on lauseehitus nii kohmakas kuidagi D: sõnastus on ka kuidagi.. jah.
muidu huvitav küll
muidu huvitav küll
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Re: Merlini lühijutud [16.08.2012 - I love a demon]
by Merlin Nelj Aug 16, 2012 4:59 pm
Olgu.
Eks ma püüa teha katset eesti keeles siis.
Eks ma püüa teha katset eesti keeles siis.
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